{"id":62488,"date":"2022-03-14T13:47:10","date_gmt":"2022-03-14T17:47:10","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.shortform.com\/blog\/?p=62488"},"modified":"2022-03-18T11:42:17","modified_gmt":"2022-03-18T15:42:17","slug":"sports-writing-tips","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.shortform.com\/blog\/sports-writing-tips\/","title":{"rendered":"Sports Writing Tips: Avoid Doing These 2 Things"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Are you a sportswriter or want to be one? Are you looking for sports writing tips?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sports writing is a form of nonfiction that reports on topics involving sports, such as athletes, games, and competitions. Zinsser notes two problems sportswriters face: making the story about them and flaunting their knowledge.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Here&#8217;s why you should avoid both. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<!--more-->\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-sports-writing\"><strong>Sports<\/strong> Writing<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Zinsser&#8217;s first sports writing tip is to write from your own perspective, but don\u2019t make a story all about you. He believes sportswriters often make themselves and their knowledge the focus rather than the athlete or the game. For example, you can report on a professional basketball game without describing your personal history of playing basketball in grade school.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Second, many sportswriters flaunt their knowledge by describing what it\u2019s like to be an athlete or to suffer a particular injury. But sportswriters don\u2019t have the expertise to comment on the mindset of a certain athlete or to explain what an injury felt like.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><tbody><tr><td><strong>Types of Sports Stories<\/strong><br><br>Zinsser discusses common problems with sports writing, but he doesn\u2019t expand on the purpose or different types of sports writing. To improve your sports writing, first <a href=\"https:\/\/www.tckpublishing.com\/sports-writing\/\">identify the key components of any sports story<\/a>: the highlights of the game, the team names, the score, and when and where the game took place. Make these elements the most important part of the story\u2014details and commentary should only support these main elements.&nbsp;<br><br>Then identify what kind of sports story you\u2019re writing. There are five main types of sports writing:<br><br>1) <strong>Straight-Lead Game Story<\/strong>: This is the most common kind of sports writing, and it provides a basic summary of the game. You should quickly present the final score, who won, and what the star player did during the game.&nbsp;<br><br>2) <strong>Feature Game Story<\/strong>: These stories present a fresh look at a game and are more in-depth than a straight-lead game story. For example, you could discuss the coach\u2019s background to give more context to the game. However, the game should be the focus, not your opinion.&nbsp;<br><br>3) <strong>Columns<\/strong>: If you\u2019re writing a column, your opinions <em>will<\/em> be a focal point of the piece. You can share your thoughts or frustrations with a team, coach, player, or game.&nbsp;<br><br>4) <strong>Profiles<\/strong>: Profiles discuss the story and experiences of an individual person, such as an athlete or coach.&nbsp;<br><br>5) <strong>Season Preview or Wrap-Up<\/strong>: These stories provide a top-level, general look at a game season. Preview stories illustrate expectations of an upcoming game season, including predictions or attitudes about the teams. Wrap-up stories discuss the game season as a whole after it has ended.&nbsp;<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Are you a sportswriter or want to be one? Are you looking for sports writing tips? Sports writing is a form of nonfiction that reports on topics involving sports, such as athletes, games, and competitions. Zinsser notes two problems sportswriters face: making the story about them and flaunting their knowledge. 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