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Are you struggling to capture your audience’s attention<\/a> in today’s fast-paced digital world? Do you want to learn how to communicate more effectively in both personal and professional settings?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Smart Brevity<\/em>, a book by Jim VandeHei, Mike Allen, and Roy Schwartz, offers a solution to these challenges. The book introduces a method for clear, concise communication<\/a> that respects readers’ time while delivering impactful messages.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Keep reading to discover how you can apply these principles to improve your writing, social media presence, and workplace communication<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n

Smart Brevity<\/em> Book Overview<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

In today\u2019s world, if you want to be heard, you have to cut straight to the point. Traditional, long-form writing and presentations are no longer effective due to the digital age\u2019s constant distractions and the modern audience\u2019s limited attention spans. Even for the most prominent and widely read publications, readers largely skim their content and give up after the first few paragraphs. Has technology destroyed reading, or is there a better way to capture and retain your audience’s attention?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

In Smart Brevity<\/em><\/a>, a book published in 2022, Jim VandeHei, Mike Allen, and Roy Schwartz argue for a concise and direct approach to communication. They introduce a method of communicating that prioritizes clarity, concision, and audience engagement while respecting your readers’ limited time. Overall, their strategy calls for being direct, so you stand out from the chaos of our digital world and deliver something fresh and worthy of your reader’s attention.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz are the cofounders of Axios, a media company known for concise news coverage. VandeHei and Allen previously worked together at Politico, where VandeHei served as executive editor and Allen authored the daily newsletter, Playbook. The authors\u2019 extensive experience in journalism and media makes them experts in crafting engaging and informative content. VandeHei is also the author of Just the Good Stuff<\/em><\/a>, a book on achieving success despite adversity.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

We\u2019ll explain why brevity and clarity in writing<\/a> have become more important. We\u2019ll show how you can improve your writing style using strong opening statements, putting information in context, and providing direction for readers who want more depth. We\u2019ll show how these principles apply outside of traditional writing, such as in social media and interoffice communications, as well as how clear, concise communication can strengthen your organization as a whole.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

We\u2019ll also look at writing suggestions that agree with, build on, and occasionally contradict Smart Brevity<\/em>\u2019s authors\u2019 advice. We\u2019ll examine how reading and writing have evolved since the advent of digital media and consider alternatives to the communication tools VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz present. We\u2019ll hear from other experts on business communication and point to insights from marketing and leadership experts on how to tailor your messaging for colleagues and external audiences alike.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Why Be Brief?<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n

In the digital age, we\u2019re bombarded with content, which is why VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz assert that most readers want you to make your point quickly.<\/strong> Like it or not, our information overload<\/a> has diminished people’s willingness and ability to focus and read deeply. Instead, we follow tweets and Instagram posts, or skim headlines instead of reading news. Therefore you, as a writer, have to contend with your reader\u2019s general lack of attention.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The authors argue that if you want to get your message across, you have to give up on intricate, wordy writing<\/a> and consider what your reader actually needs to know.<\/strong> However, in our emails, press releases, and memos, we often bury our message under a deluge of words. While \u201clong-form writing\u201d caters to our desire to explain our thoughts in detail, it fails to convey anything because it isn\u2019t adapted to the way the internet has trained readers to consume information. Research shows that internet users\u2019 eyes only linger on any single image or link for a handful of seconds at most. Therefore, any information you want to get across has to do so in those few seconds.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Make Brevity Work<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n

The question, then, is how to grab readers in today\u2019s crowded information marketplace. The answer is to be brief, but well-reasoned, constructing your message in a way that saves your readers\u2019 time and respects their intelligence. VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz outline four components of a well-structured message: a tight, punchy writing style; a strong opening sentence; a concise explanation of why the content matters; and the option for the reader to find more information if they choose to explore your subject further.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Tighten Your Writing Style<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Before you write, you need to sharpen how <\/em>you write. Instead of using flowery but timid language, adopt a punchy, to-the-point writing style with strong words, active voice, and visual cues. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

The authors advise writers to use shorter, one-syllable words whenever possible,<\/strong> since they\u2019re clearer and more memorable than multisyllable words. For instance, instead of saying that someone \u201cmade an illegal withdrawal from a financial institution,\u201d you should write that they \u201crobbed a bank.\u201d Using elaborate words and uncommon terms can confuse the reader. Short, vivid words and phrases that evoke imagery are more memorable and impactful.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The authors also encourage you to use active voice, which creates a more compelling narrative.<\/strong> \u201cActive\u201d voice is a sentence structure in which the subject of the sentence acts<\/em>, instead of being acted upon. For example, \u201cRocky Balboa knocked out Apollo Creed\u201d is more gripping than the passive form: \u201cApollo Creed was knocked out by Rocky Balboa.\u201d When using active voice, you should also use strong verbs to inject a sense of action and movement into the writing. For instance, don\u2019t write that \u201cRocky moved quickly up the bleachers\u201d\u2014instead, write that \u201cRocky ran <\/em>up the bleachers.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Lastly, the authors suggest that you employ bullet points, bold text, and images<\/strong> to break up dense paragraphs and make information more accessible. Bolded words or phrases signal to the skimming reader to stop and take note of an important idea. Pictures and bullet points serve a similar function, acting as visual roadblocks that make the reader\u2019s eye pause on crucial bits of data. The goal is to communicate effectively and efficiently using any visual tricks appropriate to your subject without wasting the reader’s time or causing confusion.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Open Strong<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Once you\u2019ve settled into an engaging writing style, it\u2019s time to craft a powerful opening statement for your message.<\/strong> VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz stress the importance of highlighting the most crucial point or idea in an attention-grabbing phrase at the beginning. Since most contemporary readers recall little of what they read, it\u2019s unlikely your point will stick in anyone\u2019s mind if you bury it in the middle of a piece of writing. Therefore, you need a strong subject line, headline, or opening sentence.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The authors suggest that you compress your opening statement to no more than six words <\/strong>and make them provocative to entice the reader, while accurately reflecting the content of your message. A strong opening sentence should convey something new and essential, capturing the reader’s interest immediately. The authors further recommend asking yourself whether your opening line or headline is something you\u2019d read if you came across it somewhere else. If not, then you need to rework it. Additionally, you can use techniques like rhetorical questions, surprising statistics, or well-known names in the opening to pique your reader’s curiosity and draw them in.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Explain the Context<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Once you\u2019ve grabbed a reader\u2019s attention, the next step is to hold it. Do this by explaining why your message is important\u2014in other words, provide context to help the reader understand the importance of the information you’re presenting. You\u2019ll have to clearly label the context so readers don\u2019t miss it; doing so will help them understand why your information is important to them personally.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz recommend you use signals to slow down readers who are skimming,<\/strong> such as a bolded heading that says \u201cWhat It Means.\u201d This can quickly help them understand why your content is relevant to them. Assume that your readers are busy and are bombarded with information from multiple sources. By explicitly stating why your particular piece of information is important upfront, you increase the odds that the reader will deem it worthy of their time.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Additionally, providing context on why your information matters helps the reader frame it properly.<\/strong> Without context, your reader may miss the larger implications of your message or fail to understand how it ties into something bigger. For instance, if you write a company memo about a new software update, readers might ignore your message unless you spell out how it might change the way they work. Clearly articulating your message\u2019s context orients the reader and lets them judge its importance. The authors also suggest that explicitly stating why your message matters demonstrates consideration for the reader. It shows that you value their attention by getting to the point<\/a> right away, rather than burying it in overwritten prose.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Furthermore, by using an explicit \u201cWhat It Means\u201d heading as the authors recommend, you tap into how modern readers naturally scan a page.<\/strong> Bold text catches the skimming reader’s eye, increasing the chances they’ll absorb what follows. Being clear about why your message matters is crucial for cutting through the internet\u2019s clutter and ultimately ensuring your most important points are actually understood by your audience.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Offer More Information<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n

Once you\u2019ve hooked your reader and given them context, offer them the option to read more if they wish. This is where long-form writing has its place. You can include the depth and detail you initially truncated as well as a path for readers to explore further without forcing them to wade through a swamp of needless text.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

VandeHei, Allen, and Schwartz recommend using an explicit \u201cmore information\u201d signpost, similar to the one you used to signal context earlier. This is an elegant way to give readers the chance to dive more deeply into a subject if they wish,<\/strong> while also respecting the time of those who just want the major takeaways. The key is that you\u2019re not forcing supplemental information on readers up front. By providing expanded information at the end, you’re making in-depth reading an opt-in experience for those with more time and greater interest in your subject.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

The authors write that this section is where you should include references to additional material on your topic.<\/strong> These could be links to news articles, research papers, book excerpts, videos, podcasts, and biographical information. Most readers likely won’t <\/em>click through these sources, but simply including them serves two important purposes:<\/p>\n\n\n\n